SkyStudios Posted May 15, 2012 Author Share Posted May 15, 2012 [](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#2b4ab427bce13aaebb1319b28c718730.bmp)pls feed backs :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hisherwin Posted May 15, 2012 Share Posted May 15, 2012 Its awesome :D nice Sprite SkyStudios Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spaz Posted May 15, 2012 Share Posted May 15, 2012 It's good, personally the eyes are a bit low and the small red and black pupil looks a bit … i don't know. Not quite right...tl;dr It's good, i'm just babbling :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkyStudios Posted May 15, 2012 Author Share Posted May 15, 2012 thanks^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myron Posted May 15, 2012 Share Posted May 15, 2012 Pillow shading :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceCream Tuesday Posted May 15, 2012 Share Posted May 15, 2012 As said pillow shaded. Colours are too saturated. As well as general form goes its alright just could use some heavy shading help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Murdoc Posted May 15, 2012 Share Posted May 15, 2012 Define a light source so its not pillow shaded.. the ears look more like horns to me and the eyes look kinda funny (shape?).. and as someone already mentioned either his eyes/mouth are too low or you simply need to give him a neck (the shirt cuts straight across making it look more like his back than his chest).. for help with shading i suggest looking at some tutorials.. anyway, not bad for an attempt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IdoFreeLogos Posted May 16, 2012 Share Posted May 16, 2012 Give the skin some texture, I do not think trolls/goblins use lotion on their skin so I would not expect such a plastic and smooth look to it….among many other problems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.LLoyd Posted May 16, 2012 Share Posted May 16, 2012 Find a light source you can't have the light coming from inside the sprite make t come from above or right or left just find a light source.And maybe move the eyes little up and remove the mouth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkyStudios Posted May 16, 2012 Author Share Posted May 16, 2012 thanks all for your feedbacks.i will watch some shading tuts ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Create an account or sign in to comment
You need to be a member in order to leave a comment
Create an account
Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!
Register a new accountSign in
Already have an account? Sign in here.
Sign In Now