kyoghin
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I'm no expert in anatomy but I can point out a few things for ya that could help. :embarrassed:
Your forearms are a little rectangular, it should have some curvature, getting a little skinnier around the wrists.
Torso could use work but I'm pretty sure you know that.
Other than that, it looks fine. I'm sure with practice and reference you'll do good. -
Aside from what's already being said..
You could use some soft gradients instead of solid colors. With that, you could try to differentiate the header and footer region the rest of the site, which is a pretty common technique…
If you have an image editor, look up a few tutorials on some simple buttons and textures you could use to match the banner you had Devo make you to spice up your navigation bar. Right now, its pretty dull with just 2-3 css styles.
Also, your nav is off center from your scroll. o_o
And refrain from arial or at least use an array of different fonts. There's a list of different typefaces built in you could use..Iuno, maybe tahoma instead for the nav? -.-;
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@âŒÂCδlorful¬:
> What do you mean how do they work? How did you make a sprite sheet but don't know how to work it???
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> Lol anyway, needs more effort, but I can totally see this in someone's game in the future.
I think Rory means that hop animations need more than just 2 frames for it to actually look like a hop. Right now, it just looks like the sprite is teleporting up and down. Try adding like, the sprite bending its knees before it jumps and when it lands to make it more convincing. -
@Chief:
> Even the php bit for your login/etc?
Yeah, I wouldn't be putting it there if I didn't know how. Depending how content rich I plan to make this site, I might just code this into a cms.
@Socuine:
> XD..
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> Layout is fine, but it's more of a "Fansite" to me, imho.
It does look like a fansite because of all the information I'm providing of the actual game; gonna fix that.. Also thanks for reminding me that I'm forgetting the most important part: a frikken download link! Probably thats why.. <_<..Maybe even I'll even add a "Store" page for micro transactions? lol..
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@Chief:
> Are you capable to code this out?
Yeah, I've coded something like this before for previous sites I've worked on similar to this. I think it should be fine, plus I have a few friends to help if I get stuck somewhere who's in the business. -
This is a mock layout of a site I plan to do for my project in photoshop. There's still a lot that needs to be done but I think you get the basic idea. :embarrassed:
A lot of things are still subject to change so I was wondering what you guys think before I start cutting this up and coding it into an actual site.
Content area is just a placeholder..so keep that in mind. :S -
Yeah you could use more trees. You can add more trees sticking out to the sides of your map without sacrificing too much viewing space.
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Not what I imagined when I read the title for line-art haha. What is it? Looks like some kind of royal emblem of some sort.
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That's the original color palette of the game though it could use some updated touch ups. Nice find.
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Yeah tone down the glow on the second one and you definitely have my vote for it. It looks much more like a "logo" because of the unique extra bits added to the text that we can probably easily recognize and associate it with your game. :/
Plus, your first one is in jpg and is pixelated which just ruins it for me, sorry. -_- -
@Devo:
> Please? :P
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> To be honest, I tried alot of backgrounds with this, and it was hard to keep the detail in the vines with anything behind it, if I find something that works i'll update it.
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> *edit ok here is one i was playing with with some stony stuff
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One of your best work imo. Very sexy. That's all I have to say. :P -
I changed the colors to compliment it better as you said I could in your PM(I tried the requested colors, it looked really bad..)
You can ask someone else if you don't like it since it's pretty far from what you probably had in mind. (I had trouble trying to create the black flames I had in mind. -_-) -
You should include scaling your photos on your list.
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Thank you for being quite specific even though the color combinations makes me wanna cry. I'll see what I can do.
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Adding bevel and emboss to pixel art is a big no no, it goes against the point of pixel art…and your bars are now kinda like, solid colors which is kinda bland....sorry, I don't like the default bevel and emboss filters on your buttons. :(
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I like the stony stroke effect on the font, it fits with the castle.
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Next time you request something and this goes for everyone…be as detailed as possible and avoid vague statements like
> colorful
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> somthing that would make you keep looking
or you get something like this.
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Here's I guess a more serious one I guess?
I removed the game cause its kinda redundant sounding. But if you want me to put it back in, just say so. -
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@Chief:
> The thing is, people don't understand how complicated those layer styles are. I'll release the PSD here soon. After someone takes a look at how its made, I should be getting some of that respect back, lol
It's not really a problem with your skill but the choice in design I guess. Simple is sometimes best if you know how to use it effectively. -
Yeah..I just didnt think I had to so I didn't; should get into the habit though. ;)
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Yeah, my only complaint is the fixed width, easily fixable but other than that, it looks good!
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Kinda seems like you're working on creating your own content management system. A pretty big task but its looking good so far. Good luck. :P
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Ragnarok? Serious? ;)
Save yourself the flaming and remove copyrighted sprites from one of the most well known MMOs as free sprites you want credit for finding.. -
So far it looks good, the navigation is pretty badass that it overshadows the content area lulz.
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I also plan to incorporate some jQuery after finishing a project for a class that required it to spice the site up a bit.