XxArchAngelxX

very nice HM, but was there a reason for doing this?

Wow lanphrost that was great. (i like the end, very nice, wont say what i like exactly in case someone else reads and doesn't want the story ruined for them) All i can say is practice your grammar (i found a few grammatical errors) and use spell check. but the errors were not to bad, like i said there are published book that have one awards that have worse mistakes. on to story feedback: the story in whole is very good. all i can say is try not repeating a word more than 4 times in a paragraph and the ending seemed a bit rushed. 9/10 also i do know this is a rough draft but i though it would be better to write too much criticism than not enough.

i'm around 1 3rd of the way through, so fr it seems like a well written story. but some (1-4) paragraphs are slit in the wrong places, and other small errors like that (which i have found in published books so don't worry) i will give more feedback when done. ~~Edit: it would also be nice for you to wright when you are changing the time i.e 6 year earlier, it just makes it easier to keep track of the story~~ lol scratch that ~The Dreamer/XxArchAngelxX

he means your client folder

I was just wondering how many of you have thought of your future and decided what Uni/Collage/TAFE they would like to go? Or if you are already in/finished where do/did you go? I would like to go here: [http://www.qantm.com.au/](http://www.qantm.com.au/)

no, its probably the 3 part thing from the main site i.e NOT ELI

no problem C(^_^)D

if you have edited tiles 10 then it is more likely you have gone over part of the night tiles

hmm… none of them are very good. but if i had to choose... 3\. Because as long as it is in International waters you could legally declare it another country

i'm sorry hippoman but no one care what you do or do not find funny

lol my lvl 3 beat Xeross!! http://xxarchxx.mybrute.com/fight/49346132

Breaking Benjamin - Evil Angel

lol good luck with that O.o

lol spike, you have to much spare time… or not enough 0.o XD Warning - while you were typing a new reply has been posted. You may wish to review your post.

yes but have DD and i ever been the first 2 replies before?

wutlolwut

i wish after reading that i could say i'm confused but i'm not…

:( and you didn't share?

did it taste hot?

stevo did this for some of the tiles in post nuke

well looks like the jig is up… my chocolate hurts

i did, it is very long…

hmm, well you ether haven't eaten anything for 9 hours (not just sugar) or the sugar you ate 9 hours ago WAS ALOT!! (sorry for the thread hijacking)

wow that reminds me of the RP ATM… 0.o

LOL wtf?… yay the comic does what it is ment to do