Sora Aoi

Well I've done another map, only this time, I tried to pay extraneous detail to how it would be made and the mechanics(npcs/block/shops/etc) behind it. It took me about two hours, but it's probably not all that great :| . It was really a random inspiration, so yeah :x lol. Also, I made a half-assed story to get my mind into what I was doing, but i'm not making a game, just mapping :] I have Npc's in the Map and they are working well, but when I take screenies, for some reason they aren't in the pic, neither am I, so sry about that :\. >!  well, here it is. The town is named after myself :3. You may have noticed the numbers I put in the maps? Well they basically mean this: 1\. Player Castle, where players go to hang out and pvp in certain areas or just relax. 2\. Chaz's Lumber store, where players can purchase their lumber to build their houses with(not programming this, so its just an idea) 3.Ferenz Forest, a place within the city for players to enjoy nature and hang out(I was going to make it larger, but for some reason I didn't :\ 4\. Gerard's Armory, where players can purchase their armour and what not. 5\. Well of well wishing :3, a place for players to relax and donate money(ingame) to the well for wishes. 6\. The Tomb of Kirkarun, an area for players to attempt to band together and beat the infamous Kirkarun, epitome of evil >:3. 7\. Draconifors Den, a friendly dragon's den where players can recieve wisdom and tutilage.[Not an empty area] 8\. Sail & Elias's Item store, for all your potion and restoritave needs :3 9\. Dorgon's Weaponry store, for all those young fool hardy adventure's who'd like to experience their first bloodshed >:8. That's all fictional, except for the Npc's/Stores, so it's not really all there, just so you know :]. I know there are a ton of mistakes and a few "naked" spots that I haven't covered up yet, but I thought it looked somewhat presentable so I'd like criticism on it :3. I like the labyrinth-y feel in towns, although, I wanted to do it differently, it's too late now, as I've already pretty much finished[few touch-ups needed], so that's why it looks that way. It's 40x40, so much bigger than my previous 2 maps (14x11). Also, I have put my own music into this(music I composed for it) and It's not visable, but **every** single item that needed to be blocked, has been and Npc spawn spots are in place, as well as different layers/fringes/masks are in place(no animation yet though), so I think I'm getting better :] Anyway, thanks for reading/looking/and critiquing :P [Ps. Sorry about the god-awful white fence in the middle, I meant to remove it, but I have no other good fence tiles atm, so it's gonna have to stay for abit. please don't hate on it too much, I know it's bad :x]

Thanks for the critique :], and as for the size of the maps, I'm still tinkering/learning the mechanics, so sorry about that =X . Yeah, my "camp" wasn't all that camp-ish, but I was very limited in the way that I wanted to design it with the tileset I had(default), combine that with my inexperience and this was the result of that :/ . Thanks for the compliment on the Port. I actually looked for an "RPG(-ish) Dock" tileset and tried to atleast make it seem realistic. I'm working on the NPCs now actually, but when I took the screenie, I hadn't put any in, so that's why their absent. :embarrassed:

Hello :| well, here we go lol. j/k uh, I've decided to venture out and do mapping? It's a question, cause i'm not sure if you can really call it that? :B I mainly compose/play music, so to try mapping is out of my field of expertise :8 Tell me how these look, I just did them 2 hrs ago, and their my first so yeah :|. Don't be to harsh :x >!  -My attempt at a "camp" scene-  -This would be my Port, for when brave adventurers are in need of items :| lol- Some comments/critiques would be nice. As long as they're constructive :3, cause as I've already made clear, i'm a complete newbie =S. [Yes, the first map has a black border, but thats only cause… it's night time, yeah :B & now that I look at it, I have no idea why I used that metal walkway instead of something more "earthy", so shame on me :'( ]