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JustinSD

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  1. For your bg, its alright. Use a dynamic map or something from your game.

    The text looks like complete shit, use something from dafont.com that isn't as cursive-ish.

    Place a box around the login field, it looks odd with floating text "username / password"

    overall

    2/10

    May be harsh, but honest.
  2. > Got it? Good, now **stop bloody copying me, already.**
    >
    > And while you're at it, attribute the template that you're using for eatenBrain. You shouldn't pass off such decent work as your own. :]
    >
    > Geez, the amount of times this has happened. Why aren't people like you cut away from here, yet?!

    I've seen entenbrain copy nearly seven people sites and try to brush it off as its nothing. I would have offered you guys free hosting if you had done different and not tried to copy my layout as well previously.
  3. Carim.me

    [http://www.dynadot.com/domain/me.html](http://www.dynadot.com/domain/me.html)

    They have it on sale for $8.99 / year

    I bought a personal .me domain so I could have my First/Lastname.me email and use it for all work / professional references. Just an idea having it your full name Vs CarimIsAwesome.me or something
  4. Remove the periods after the "Im a student with an eye for design" and "This is my portfolio" It looks unique if you had it on just the My name is Carim.

    Also I'd recommend changing your header pattern to something more subtle. I always recommend this site http://subtlepatterns.com/

    Here's an example of a super simplistic portfolio (Buddies)

    http://port.itsjtam.com/
  5. > 1) No way you have 280 active users and still use a .webs domain.
    >
    > 2) No one is gonna apply for a game with no information.

    Beat me to it

    QFT

    Also, if you are going to have a twitter feed / stream on your site don't make it your personal one you post Call of duty videos on, looks shitty imo.
  6. Might as well hop on the wagon if you plan on doing another for next month.

    [http://www.Skideria.com](http://www.Skideria.com)

    [http://www.Sd.skideria.com](http://www.Sd.skideria.com)

    [http://www.blastersonline.com](http://www.blastersonline.com)

    [http://www.online.skideria.com](http://www.online.skideria.com)

    [http://www.skideria.com/portal.php](http://www.skideria.com/portal.php)
  7. > It's nothing mindblowing, if I'm honest, but compared to 80-90% of the games here, it appears to look, function, sound, and play better in just about every aspect.
    >
    > Of course, from what I'm told, there isn't even combat, items, or NPCs at the moment, and just a few simple maps, and I've already stated that I believe they released far too early to constitute a basic game.
    >
    > @Skideria: Not a personal attack. Just what I believe at the moment.

    I know it seems nothing mind blowing right now, but what was shown and released for Alpha (1) was just the very core of the game. We mainly used it to make sure our mapping corners were completely fixed and edged, as well test the servers stress and performance. Just hang with us in the next up coming months.

    I know it's not personal, we love constructive criticism. It helps us build into the community that our players want.
  8. I would gladly say that Seth is probably the best designer around if not one of the best designers on Eclipse.

    Working hand in hand with the guy, he's got his shit together and has put forth too much effort to have us continually be told our game is a rip of the old shit silverdale which was trashed, I'd be piss too.

    What no one else is getting is Sekaru has had some sort of butthurt hatred towards us, well mainly me at first (Although I was friendly to you)

    If anyone else is willing to put forth this much time and effort into a games design, feel free to step up. If I was in his shoes I'd be just as arrogant.

    ![](http://i.imgur.com/uKGTj.png)

    Nearly every document is over 10 pages and goes into full details of EVERY SINGLE ASPECT

    Either way this thread was not needed to stir more shit up.

    I'm out, got stuff to get done for tonight :3

    ![](http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-e_93bqObbWI/T_nN1U6w4wI/AAAAAAAADi0/337sgTC7iLE/s1600/haters_gonna_hate.jpg)
  9. Love the color palette choices you use.

    The header catches my attention right away and I understand / get how to navigate fairly easily.

    One thing that did bug me was the YT and DB icons, I get they match the sites theme that they return to, just the red and green threw me off.

    Other than that its fairly good.
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