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the shadow at the bottom ?

do you think it fits in well tho, something about it im not sure about :S lol

Think i sorted the sprite out pretty easily by just moving eyes like you said. To fix tree i realised i must totally redo the texture of leaves, this definitely has a direction of light source but im not too sure of final product, what do you guys think ? 

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some more work on the cliffs, updated first post

> I did a really quick edit on some things I think could be improved > >  > > Tree doesn't seem to have any depth and shading.. it's just a plain texture repeated.. instead of focusing on the leaves you should focus on the tree as whole. Make a decision on the light source and follow it.. > > Sprites I think could use more dramatic poses and more unique designs, I used Duran sprite from Seiken Densetsu 3 as reference. I would suggest sketching the sprites on paper first. > > If you are having trouble with texturing the grass, there's actually really no need to texture it.. :- ) > > > > > > I think the tileset should be more natural looking, I'd suggest references like Chrone Trigger, Seiken Densetsu.. I know I can't make a tileset as good as these games, and neither can you, but I'm not telling you to do the impossible, what I mean is just to follow the shapes/shading done in these games, take a look at the cliff for example, while yours has 2 straight lines on sides, theirs has more bumps on sides making it more natural.. > > > > Hope I'm not being too harsh with this comment, since my intention is not to downgrade anyone.. I see the work has been improved through the versions you've posted, and I'm glad to see that you guys are giving your best.. Even though I can't provide you with the best critique and best edits /examples I'm hoping I help you at least a little bit :- ) > > > > Goodluck ! thanks for this :) although its not the style i really want i understand what you mean, the trees deffinately need a light source and shading, something i must adresse soon :P the slime sprites you posted have inspired me to redo mine with a little more character :) The character sprites will eventually get more poses, just i only made them to the limitations of the 4 frame sprites which the engine can use, but deffinately want to implement more :) Ill also look over the cliffs some more, try to make them more natural : ) > I really like the v1.1 character sprites. There's just _something _about them… Yer i also think there better, they are bigger and leave more room for detail, i think that might be why :P

ha great edit :P i think i understand what your trying to get across, i havent got round to redoing the stone walls yet but should get to it soon and show what iv done, thanks for feedback :)

v1.1 has lighter pallete than the new 1 ? i dont understand :P

Updated first post, check it out and some feedback please :)

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Amazing work

Iv had to make a new Topic for this because i have a new account due to loosing my old one, so here goes: **The beginning v.1.0 >!  >! >! >! **Big Graphics Update V 1.1 >! >! **Whats Changed:** >! **-Total revamp of tileset**** ****-Changed pallete** **-Changed Character Sprite** **-Added Character clothing**   **New Graphics V1.2 **Whats Changed:** -**Revamped sprite** (i loved the old sprite it was just too big for the tileset, so i did same style but ultimately it was redone from scratch). -**Changed the grass texture**. -**Revamped Tree** (Same as the sprite, i loved the old tree it just need some tweeking in size for tileset, also more alteration in the leaves and tones). -**Added a new type of roof**. -**Added front porch for house** (still needs shading and textures adding). -**Added Monster Sprites** (Mini Slime, Slime, Slime King, Giant Rat). -**Apple tree** (small edit to the tree to add some fruit and variation.  **New Cliffs** **Some new cliffs iv been working on, what do you think, am i going in the right direction, c&c please :) NEW on left, OLD on right.  New cliffs, more definition between grass and less straight lines, ********