Hello, all! Sorry if this isn't the right category, I'm new to the forums, and having some troubles finding the right place to post things. Right now I am in the process of creating my first game. If anyone with a talent in writing could help me out, that would be great. On the opening screen, I've just added an "About" button, but I can't exactly summarize the game. This is what I wrote (The name of the game is Call of the Mountains); "You are a young dog, living beside the looming cliffs of Itiah that seem too call your name. Though you live with the humans, shut up in a flimsy barn, your pelt itches to explore the world behind the walls. And so you will, along with the all the other dogs who can hear the call of the mountains ringing in their ears. Call of the Mountains is an MORPG that stars packs of feral dogs as they explore the never-ending mountains. The game is always updating and improving, featuring packs, territory, prey, battles, and kind staff! So don't hesitate, join now!" For some reason it doesn't sound right to me. The game is.. well, what I just wrote. It's about dogs that live in the town of Itiah, right at the base of large, looming mountains. Once they get past the start of the game (exit the town), they go into the mountains. The game will have a guild system ('Pack' system), and hopefully I can find some way for the said packs to gain territory. (Side note; If anyone would like to join this project, please contact me! ^^ Or if anyone has some tips.) Thanks for reading. -Vixen