?Storyline?

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you guys think this is a good storyline?

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the game starts off at high school but when you go to attend your first class you fall asleep during the class (make it like a cinimatic type thing) and you find yourself in a dream (this is when the player starts) he starts off level 100 great weapons and stats (dream what u expect?) he is in one of the last quest of the game and he has to go through like the last 3 maps of the quest (slay a dragon to save a princess somthing like that) and as he finishes off the dragon bam he wakes up in class (stats back to normal and level and all that) standing on his desk yelling PRINCESS ILL SAVE YOU!!!! and the bell rings to go to next class the kids start picking on the player and he has to fight them (in a battle like they are monsters) the stats of them are high tho cuz your sapost to lose then when you hit 4 hp left (script it in well most of this has to be scripted in) all the guys run out of the room and a huge door opens up in the middle of class and the door says "welcome (playername) you do not belong on earth enter the gate" and then you choose to enter or not (if you dont then you go to your next class and the game gets lame until it happens again) so you go into the door and you find yourself in the dream world (wahoo just not in the last quest) your stats are boosted a little (like up 5 levels) and from there on you start your quest like a regular mmorpg and the game is about you trying to find the princess you once had in your dream since you kno you are in your dream world???

so what you think?!