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A poem


Reguba
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Ok bash me how you want on this one its a poem i made tonight for school, its my first poem i have ever written and its about a happy memory.

The Gift

It was christmas 'morn A
I woke to the sight of snow B
And realized this was the day Jesus was born A
But much more was still there to know B
O'er near the Christmas tree something lay for me C
I went by and saw it as i went to pee C

When i came back my mom stood near D
She told us all to sit E
The way she said it made me fear D
But she pulled out my present and said look at it E
I started to look and wondered what it could be F
When i saw it I was so happy and wondered how I got this without a fee! F

The abcdef things at the end of each line are the rhyme schemes.
remeber this is my first poem so may your criticism be not so harsh :P
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