Reguba Posted March 12, 2007 Author Share Posted March 12, 2007 Ok bash me how you want on this one its a poem i made tonight for school, its my first poem i have ever written and its about a happy memory.The GiftIt was christmas 'morn AI woke to the sight of snow BAnd realized this was the day Jesus was born ABut much more was still there to know BO'er near the Christmas tree something lay for me CI went by and saw it as i went to pee CWhen i came back my mom stood near DShe told us all to sit EThe way she said it made me fear DBut she pulled out my present and said look at it EI started to look and wondered what it could be FWhen i saw it I was so happy and wondered how I got this without a fee! FThe abcdef things at the end of each line are the rhyme schemes.remeber this is my first poem so may your criticism be not so harsh :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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