Skillzalot Posted April 12, 2009 Author Share Posted April 12, 2009 Me and my friend are working on the storyline for my game Drasina and i want to know what you guys think of the first paragraphThe planet of Bamecia is covered in lush, green forests,blazing desserts, and freezing tundras. It is not onesolid land mass but several coming together. This is the story of one of the more well-known masses, known as Aeos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobbus Posted April 12, 2009 Share Posted April 12, 2009 Sounds too generic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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