Tesaquer Posted April 21, 2009 Author Share Posted April 21, 2009 Well for English we had to each write a follow on paragraph from a book. We were given the paragraph. So this is my paragraph afterwards. I get extremely stage shy and reading infront of the class was really quite scary lol. Okay here it is:_Slithering towards me another crash of lightning illuminated his rough,torn face. He seemed to talk like thunder and move like lightning. His face glued me to the spot. His words were spat like venom. "Stop." I quiverred with fright. What was he going to do with me? Luckily I was prepared for him. W withdrew a silver handgun, cold as ice. Another boom of thunder. Adrenaline coursed through my veins, my heart beat quickened. Then time slowed as I saw his gaunt face and the flick of the knife from his pocket it was as sharp as a needle, as light as a crystal. Then my finger closed over the trigger. A boom of thunder and he was on the floor. Stone dead. I had done it! Mr Jaynes would be pleased._- George AllenHeh hope you like it.! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RiseAgainst7580 Posted April 21, 2009 Share Posted April 21, 2009 nice lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tesaquer Posted April 21, 2009 Author Share Posted April 21, 2009 Thanks. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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