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  1. PM me the mail you wanna create an account with and you'll be able to play free from today. ![:P](http://www.touchofdeathforums.com/community/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/tongue.png) Ill send you an invite. …
  2. Have you guys heard about Firefall?

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AXHStOSxFYM

    I have 5 beta invites for those interested.

    You have to pm me your email and ill send you an invite.
  3. > Do you seriously not have a single fluent English speaker in your dev' team? You guys seem to have about 89 developers; there must be someone…
    >
    > If not, maybe you need to recruit someone to fill that job.

    I will also try to fix some of the grammar errors here and there, and re-write the lore.

    EDIT:

    Guys, i kinda agree with Carim here, we need to fix some place to talk and share stuff while the website is down.

    We can't talk stuff like this in the Wip page.
  4. > Endless Blue Moon Online is a free 2D MMORPG from NorthHarrier Game Design. Players start out in the small town of White Oak and must battle monsters to advance in the game. Endless Blue Moon Online offers the three classes of Annihilator ,Champion , Thaumaturge, and Marksman.
    >
    > TheNorthernHarrier (MusicCityHQ)

    Endless Blue Moon Online offers the three classes of Annihilator ,Champion , Thaumaturge, and Marksman

    1 2 3 4

    I'm sorry what?
  5. > At forums… I think almost everytime about 6 players ingame is quite good for an eclipse game...

    To be honest Sacra, i've been watching eclipse games for some time and also other small independent orpg's.

    The only games who manage to stay above, and also make a few bucks from donations or other means are the ones who have custom graphics and lots of customization.

    Take endless online for example. That game is so very simple gameplay wise, but players are just charmed by the graphics and the number of available customization options. So not only it survived for so many years, but there are many private servers of that game with lots of players.

    I think people are just tired of Rpg maker graphics and i believe that it's the graphics and music that give the game character and makes it compelling.

    If you ever want to go custom graphics and music you can count on my help.
  6. Not gorge , I'm striving to make a singleplayer stealthy rogue-ish style sidescroller rpg. Will be based on a day/ night (Light / shadow) mechanic.

    Meaning, that when it's night your colour will be the same with the background colour. So to remain unnoticed you have to hide in the shapes of other objects, because your fighting abilities are next to none. *See the head coming out of the side of the house, that's the main character*

    Better yet, i'm thinking that Darkveil would suit more this mechanic and would make more sense, so going to change.

    Edit: so just have ot check if Darkveil doesn't exist already.

    Couldn't find a game under this name, if you know one please hit me.
  7. Changed the thread name, going to showoff more of the gameart in here.

    Playing around with colors, shapes and vectors for a title screen.

    New version. Older versions for reference are found on imgur account haniyou.

    Quite happy with this version, will only probably make slight modifications in the future…. Or change it completely.. who knows..

    >! ![](http://i.imgur.com/MDs0vcF.png)

    Mockup of vector char sprite.

    >! ![](http://i.imgur.com/28E7wZV.png)
  8. Your lore still has many many issues, not necessarily spelling issues but coherency ones.

    For example.

    "

    Fifth Prospektor - Ilaus

    was killed after 7 years of

    imprisonment of Oagi in sleep. It

    is assumed that it did someone

    from Elautus."

    Something more close to being correct would be:

    " The Fifth Prospektor - Ilaus was killed by Oagi / in his sleep/ after 7 (long) (In lore, especially fantasy tales, exagerations sound good here and there.) years of imprisonment. It is assumed that someone from Elautus commited this (horrible act of betrayal) ."

    So you see, translating word by word from your native language to english does not make the result correct because the phrasing is different.

    That aside, assuming that the lore ideea is yours, it sounds promising. My advice to you would be to find someone who speaks english fluently and give him a bone to translate for you.

    Best of luck with your project.
  9. Well, plagiarsm or no plagiarism, the game doesn't look so appealing, but the thing you need REALLY bad is a spellcheck.

    Even in the screenshot on that article about your game i can find 3 errors. : pigeon (Pidgeon) ,Chabubble ( Chat bubble), Crossroads of Destin (Crossroads of Destiny),

    And i'm not even going to speak about that feature list that i guess they pasted from you (If not, the guy who wrote it needs a spellcheck too)

    I hope you undestand this as constructive critiques, because spelling errors only substract from the immersion and from your image as developers.
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