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Lanphrost

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  1. I want to make it so that there is a tile the moves your sprite up/down by __ pixels
    I think this can be done in main under scripted tiles by using:
    MovePlayer(ByVal index As Long, ByVal Direction As Long, ByVal Movement As Long)
    but honestly I don't understand half of what that means.
    Please note that I would also have to make sure they don't decrease height EVEERYTIME they touch these tiles, only when they aren't already down/up.
  2. @Soljah:

    > Ouch… wall of text, no thanks... =/ I read a few random lines and it seams like its good... :P

    @Desiderium:

    > Use margins, or something. =/

    There, an update for everyone who had problems with the 'wall of text' =^-^= the link has been changed from directly viewing the document to a webpage the document, which will hopefully reduce the problem.
  3. @[BS:

    > The Dreamer [XxArchxX] link=topic=42881.msg429807#msg429807 date=1240128093]
    > Wow lanphrost that was great.
    > (i like the end, very nice, wont say what i like exactly in case someone else reads and doesn't want the story ruined for them)
    >
    > All i can say is practice your grammar (i found a few grammatical errors) and use spell check. but the errors were not to bad, like i said there are published book that have one awards that have worse mistakes.
    >
    > on to story feedback:
    > the story in whole is very good. all i can say is try not repeating a word more than 4 times in a paragraph and the ending seemed a bit rushed.
    >
    > 9/10
    >
    > also i do know this is a rough draft but i though it would be better to write too much criticism than not enough.

    I'm very (very) glad to have some real feedback on my story. I am revising it to make the ending less rushed, as I feel storyline wise that was the worst part. I'm also working on a part two with twists you'd never see coming ;3 but that's a story for another time. By the end of this all I should have a book composed of not-so-short stories following this storyline. Think of what you read as the first of 2-5 chapters.
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