Lanphrost

When you leave the computer and suddenly jump back on it because you're afraid Eclipse might grow legs and walk away.

When you believe it is through you that god kills kittens for necroposts (but seriously… don't necropost X3)

When you get banned and you hide in your room asking god 'why' for a month

I never pick low stats… they have epic weapons and pets...

I've never lost more than two fights in a row

just pointing that one out XD

@Jarell: > Funny…And I wish I could agree with that quote. @Marsh: > Quote: Sent byDesiderium > You're an eclipse addict when you wish Eclipse was your family. Lol

@Soljah: > Ouch… wall of text, no thanks... =/ I read a few random lines and it seams like its good... :P @Desiderium: > Use margins, or something. =/ There, an update for everyone who had problems with the 'wall of text' =^-^= the link has been changed from directly viewing the document to a webpage the document, which will hopefully reduce the problem.

*drops to his knees and bows* all hail Marsh

(that's an old one X3 ) You're an eclipse addict when you put sadscript notes into a dirty magazine so that your friends don't know you're getting a boner over lines of code. (inappropriate, just tell me if I should delete it)

um… it could use some work. Try: you're an eclipse addict when you SENSE the very second 3.0 is ready for release. No one has to tell you, you just know

@[BS: > The Dreamer [XxArchxX] link=topic=42881.msg429807#msg429807 date=1240128093] > Wow lanphrost that was great. > (i like the end, very nice, wont say what i like exactly in case someone else reads and doesn't want the story ruined for them) > > All i can say is practice your grammar (i found a few grammatical errors) and use spell check. but the errors were not to bad, like i said there are published book that have one awards that have worse mistakes. > > on to story feedback: > the story in whole is very good. all i can say is try not repeating a word more than 4 times in a paragraph and the ending seemed a bit rushed. > > 9/10 > > also i do know this is a rough draft but i though it would be better to write too much criticism than not enough. I'm very (very) glad to have some real feedback on my story. I am revising it to make the ending less rushed, as I feel storyline wise that was the worst part. I'm also working on a part two with twists you'd never see coming ;3 but that's a story for another time. By the end of this all I should have a book composed of not-so-short stories following this storyline. Think of what you read as the first of 2-5 chapters.

Your an eclipse addict when you would jump off a bridge because Marsh told you Eclipse 3.0 was at the bottom.

It feels good to see people try new things in my pants

lol? *edit… finally understand that joke... I feel slow...*

*laughing* in my pants

I know, 'in my pants' jokes are much better…. in my pants

lol

nice… I think I did my turns for today

Yeah, people with clubs get nearly no skills or stat boosts… but they are still nearly invincible

thank you but the point is the story not the page it's on, like I said this is a rough draft. I'm looking for feedback on the story.

@Soljah: > Ouch… wall of text, no thanks... =/ I read a few random lines and it seams like its good... :P I'm working on the 'wall of text' problem, thank you

I'll start by saying that eclipse needs a public 'arts' board added to it, which would include Literature and Art (that isn't eclipse-related) I'll also say that for the first time I've written and finished a story that I liked, and it is now in it's second phase (editing) what I am posting is a link to the original and constantly updating story currently a rough draft. I'd like ALL the criticism possible, things that could be improved, and a list of everything you didn't like. If you want to post something nice about it feel free but Constructive Criticism is encouraged. thank you. [http://sites.google.com/site/eternaldreamproject/](http://sites.google.com/site/eternaldreamproject/) (Note this may take 30-90 minutes to read) well… since I have no poll power we'll just have people post yes or no to the poll option (should arts section be added)

Hm… then it's a way to force them to manually update. That's a good thing to know... even if it's not an updater it's useful.

Alright! I FOUND IT! =>.>= When you change the version number (2.7.0) during compilation of the client (I changed it to 0.0.0 ) it will tell you it's out-dated… I'm going to look for a fix for this... or maybe a way to exploit it.