Jaiden
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Changed it up a bit
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@Jungle:
> I don't mean to be immature, but you should probably move the place he is holding that stick…
Ugh. My brother said that, I really didnt think it was that bad. His crotch line was way more to the left in the drawing too. -
Haha. I don't mind. The colors are nice, but a little heavy on the overlay and contrast I think :P
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Go ahead. Just be ready to have all your hard work crumble to pieces when you either don't finish it or Nintendo sends you a C&D.
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Haha alright, thank you. I'm surprised the lineart was good, I have really no effective means of lineart than scanning in a pencil drawing outlined in pen and cleaning it up with a mouse.
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Just recently finished this up. The only thing that's incomplete is the sprite display, I should be finishing that soon.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=98uZnm-oLuY&feature=player_profilepage
The picture probably won't stay, I'll fix it up into something nicer later on. But I would love to hear comments and critique on the actual menu design. -
The cliffs have nice shape, but overall have a lot of errors in both design and consistency. Try to mix it up a bit instead of them all just being round, and try to keep heights the same with aligned cliffs. Some of the cliffwork south is kind of awkward too.
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Looking alright, the mapping is a bit messy though. Quite a few mistakes like mismatched cave walls and messed up edges, and the combination of tiles is kind of awkward.
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Thanks! If you're still interested helping with some other little things, let me know!
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Added a screenshot of Valica Castle's entrance, the starting area.
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In game GUI
in Q & A
I'm quite flattered. It's called using photoshop to design a GUI and then what BugSICK mentioned, manually arranging things in frmMain. -
@RyokuHasu:
> That one word makes me not want to help.
Maybe English isn't his first language and he doesn't know how to use the word. It's posts like that that aren't helpful at all, seriously.
If you can't help him, don't even post. It's about helping them out, not criticizing their diction.
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@blkcrow:
> i have said that again but… your texture is only dots not realistic at all try making weird shapes and stuff like that and see how it looks
It's not meant to be realistic. Let him keep his style, it's unique.
It just needs a little bit of modification. -
Definitely looking a lot better!
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@Ice:
> Ah, okay I thought you meant the blades themselves so I added another blade color, i'll try tht now.
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> Lukin, I stated that but decided I disliked the grass to even attempt a fix.
Well the variation in blade color is good, but there should also be a variation in base color. -
No no, now it's just brighter. Keep it that same green, but add a variation of greens under the "blades" of grass that you drew.
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Suggestion for the wood floor, add a little more texture like the fence and also do some horizontal lines to make panels. Wood floors aren't just straight boards.
For the dirt, it looks good, but you might want to add a little more variation with the colors to give it more depth. -
Could use a little more variation in color I think underneath the actual grass detail if you catch my drift, but I like your style a lot.
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Added paperdoll examples
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I love the shading, it's a unique style with a lot of depth.
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@Antisora:
> Do you happen to know how/have the codes?
It's a far larger matter than "having the codes", I can assure you. -
Well, it isn't meant to be realistic! I want critique on the actual pixel art, not whether or not it would actually work.
And I mentioned in the main post it wasn't 32x32 Quess, it's not suppose to be.
Thanks for the positive comments though guys! -
Hey everyone,
This is my first serious attempt at spiriting a sword. It's fairly simple and isn't the default size.
I have thick skin, so I'd really love some critique.
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Bumping to the first page–project is very much active. Expect some updates soon!
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