magic8ball

This is my humble storyline. Critisize it but dont flame. I feel like I am missing something. On the island city of Prokas a Alchemist was trying to turn lead into gold. He believed that by mixing certain chemicals and heating them up to a very high temperature that he would succeed in doing what no other person on earth could do even though hundreds had waisted there entire lives trying. What he rely succeeded in making was far from gold. The chemicals that he mixed along with the high intensity of heat allowed for a one in a million thing to happen. He placed the lead into the furnace and then went to sleep believing that it would take time. That was his second mistake. The first was that he had left the furnace unlatched. Not a bad thing if he was just burning wood no one expects your wood to come jump out of your furnace and be the worst thing to ever happen to man kind. A Departed is created from the one thing it cant stand, Fire. Just as evil spawns from good and opposites attract. But there is one thing that is more essential to make a Departed, a Human. Most Departeds die within the hour they are formed. But by committing murder they finish the process. Since committing cold blooded murder is one of the worst things any thing can do and is so symbolic that the force of a living being getting wiped off the earth allows these creatures to live on. Sadly for the old alchemist he woke up and saw this creature laying almost passed out on the floor. It was greatly weakened by the fire. This is another reason why most Departed don't survive. The intense heat from the fire destroys most of them. The Departed created by the alchemist murdered him in cold blood and if that wasn't bad enough not one but 4 Departeds were created that night. Only minutes after the first one had murdered the old alchemist 3 more came out of the furnace. Departed are born with a vast array of knowledge. It is instinct for them to kill humans but to kill at least one as soon as they can is more then instinct its in there genes. So the three that came out were on a mission to murder. That is how the entire Macryan family was wiped out. The Departed had viciously strangled the mother the father and there new born baby. Then they set a nearby barn on fire to burn it down. Knowing that it would attract people and be a feeding frenzy for the Departeds that would soon be made. This is how the rest of the city was devoured murdered and destroyed. Leaving only ruins behind and one building standing. The old alchemists house which is now the spawning ground of the departed. This is how the Lost Island of the Departed came to be. It is why humans fear everything that comes from the western sea. They know the Departed will come for them soon. They just don't know when.

Please Read my story line and give me feed back. I can take criticism but please don't flame. If you don't like something please have a reason. On the island city of Prokas a Alchemist was trying to turn lead into gold. He believed that by mixing certain chemicals and heating them up to a very high temperature that he would succeed in doing what no other person on earth could do even though hundreds had waisted there entire lives trying. What he rely succeeded in making was far from gold. The chemicals that he mixed along with the high intensity of heat allowed for a 1 in a million thing to happen. He placed the lead into the furnace and then went to sleep believing that it would take time. That was his second mistake. The first was that he had left the furnace unlatched. Not a bad thing if he was just burning wood no one expects your wood to come jump out of your furnace and be the worst thing to ever happen to man kind. A Departed is created from the one thing it cant stand, Fire. Just as evil spawns from good and opposites attract. But there is one thing that is more essential to make a Departed, a Human. Most Departeds die within the hour they are formed. But by committing murder they finish the process. Since committing cold blooded murder is one of the worst things any thing can do and is so symbolic that the force of a living being getting wiped off the earth allows these creatures to live on. Sadly for the old alchemist he woke up and saw this creature laying almost passed out on the floor. It was greatly weakend by the fire. This is another reason why most Departed don't survive. The intense heat from the fire destroys most of them. The Departed created by the alchemist murdered him in cold blood and if that wasn't bad enough not one but 4 Departeds were created that night. Only minutes after the first one had murdered the old alchemist 3 more came out of the furnace. Departed are born with a vast array of knowledge. It is instinc for them to kill humans but to kill at least one as soon as they can is more then instinc its in there genes. So the three that came out were on a mission to murder. That is how the entire Macryan family was wiped out. The Departed had viciously strangled the mother the father and there new born baby. Then they set a nearby barn on fire to burn it down. Knowing that it would attract people and be a feeding frenzy for the Departeds that would soon be made. This is how the rest of the city was devoured murdered and destroyed. Leaving only ruins behind and one building standing. The old alchemists house which is now the spawning ground of the departed. This is how the Lost Island of the Departed came to be. It is why humans fear everything that comes from the western sea. They know the Departed will come for them soon. They just don't know when.

i want to have mineing and fishing and other stuff how i do it scripts other optiosn how ?

I have started my game im only 5% done and have like 41 maps is this good bad, or am i crazy. Is there a average map amount.