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Nate Melo

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  1. You may be prematurely jumping into this from the sounds of it. And I totally understand why - because I was exactly the same way. ;) Haha.

    > "Embark on an
    > adventure with
    >  dual
    > fire breathing dragons, battle-
    > corrupted ocrs
    > , slay a demonic dark lord
    > . Build your dream fortress, collect epic loot, ride wondrous dragons, tame ferocious beasts, and do much more all in "Name to be decided"! Are you ready for the ultimate adventure? "

    In red are things that I corrected with _proper_ English and the second sentence is simply a list that is too long for a normal attention span.

    I really don't mean to be rude and I intend not to be, I hope you're taking this as constructive criticism. It's _**not**_ bad! But it's not correct.

    Take a look at Division of Life. Write him some example work based on what you see and play.

    It's a very impressive piece of work so far, so be sure you know what you're getting into.
  2. > What is a public representative exactly. I am new to eclipse and if you would like, maybe we can work together? I have been using eclipse for around a month without a account and I have finally decided to make an account. I am really just looking to help out people but I don't have much experience too be honest but would love to help.

    Hey brother, he is looking for someone to help in a game made in Unity - not Eclipse.

    As far as a Public Representative, I am safely presuming that he needs someone to handle the marketing/public concerns side of the game. You would be responsible for getting the game out there into the public, answering any questions players may have, and relay and player concerns/questions to the respective teams.

    Any blogs and website information updates would generally be written by PR as well but it depends on how well you do everything else - including how well your written English is. ;)
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