Wulfie Posted July 22, 2012 Author Share Posted July 22, 2012 Hello everyone, here's a result of my today's two hours boredom ^^. I was aiming for simplicness, I also always wanted to create a very simple ORPG with cute graphic's and loads of fun activities, too bad, I'm too unskilled to do that :).I was kinda lazy at end, so you won't see here a large variety of sprites and enemies, but I may add something more, sometimes ^^.So, here is it, enjoy :).![](http://oi47.tinypic.com/14kkzfm.jpg) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harris6310 Posted July 22, 2012 Share Posted July 22, 2012 The cacti look like they are partying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dash Posted July 22, 2012 Share Posted July 22, 2012 Looks like some casual fun, nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaaron Posted July 22, 2012 Share Posted July 22, 2012 Maybe if there were two different types of cacti, it would look more…natural? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irhymer Posted July 23, 2012 Share Posted July 23, 2012 I'm in love with the graphics! You said you wouldn't make a game out of it? haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Likestodraw Posted July 23, 2012 Share Posted July 23, 2012 I LOVE the graphics! The only two things I have for you-1\. Things look a bit more natural when you use multiple types of an item (ex. trees)2\. The snowman to player ratio is very messed up. Fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief Posted July 23, 2012 Share Posted July 23, 2012 @Likestodraw:> 2\. The snowman to player ratio is very messed up. Fix it.Theres also no such thing as a slime. Your logic makes no sense, there. The ratio doesn't need to be realistic, its a fantasy game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Socuine Posted July 23, 2012 Share Posted July 23, 2012 Agreed with Dolan.The mock up looks very nice. Clean, simple yet adorable. I like your style. Can't wait to see more of that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wulfie Posted July 23, 2012 Author Share Posted July 23, 2012 Glad you like it guys ^^, Ill work on it some more time today.The snowman is supposed to be some kind of a boss monster, that's why it's bigger :). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted July 24, 2012 Share Posted July 24, 2012 @Socuine:> The mock up looks very nice. Clean, simple yet adorable. I like your style. Can't wait to see more of that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wulfie Posted July 24, 2012 Author Share Posted July 24, 2012 Hai again :), I decided to enlarge the mockup a bit. First thing to change are the sprites, but as always, I can't decide which colors look better, you may be able to help me, so here's two versions of my new dwarfish/chubby sprites ^^.![](http://oi46.tinypic.com/2m7un8h.jpg) (It's still a WIP, tho.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Socuine Posted July 24, 2012 Share Posted July 24, 2012 I like the anatomy, well, it _could_ be better. It's too 'squary' imo. The colors seems to saturated. Try to use some more contrast to make them more lively. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dash Posted July 24, 2012 Share Posted July 24, 2012 I like the sprites first color is alright just bit more contrast like above, the eyes I don't like as much and the plain black pixel for bellybutton and nipples never looks right lol. I see like a fox face on his chest/stomach. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wulfie Posted July 24, 2012 Author Share Posted July 24, 2012 Thanks for the crit guys, I tried to vary the colors, and add some pixels to the ,,plain black pixel,, so he won't feel lonely anymore :).![](http://i47.tinypic.com/28heyaf_th.png) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceCream Tuesday Posted July 24, 2012 Share Posted July 24, 2012 Adding more around it isn't what he meant.. just change to your shade tone. Also remove the white outline, and thin out the black outline, use a little AA. Looks good overall, but those main issues are holding it back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wulfie Posted July 24, 2012 Author Share Posted July 24, 2012 Uhm… Here's another version, changed the darker shade, and changed the outline.![](http://oi49.tinypic.com/25g6m2a.jpg) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Likestodraw Posted July 25, 2012 Share Posted July 25, 2012 @Chief:> Theres also no such thing as a slime. Your logic makes no sense, there. The ratio doesn't need to be realistic, its a fantasy game.I know that, it's just that it looks really wide compared to ANYTHING in the mockup. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vus Posted July 25, 2012 Share Posted July 25, 2012 @Likestodraw:> I know that, it's just that it looks really wide compared to ANYTHING in the mockup.Yea, it does. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cloudsky Posted July 26, 2012 Share Posted July 26, 2012 Lovely! I love the simplicity!I would love to see a lake as well.._. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Likestodraw Posted July 26, 2012 Share Posted July 26, 2012 Yeah, water tiles would look good. Even better: UNDERwater tiles. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minilinkki Posted July 30, 2012 Share Posted July 30, 2012 Very cute graphics you have there! I think you should add lighting to black outlines too :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wulfie Posted July 30, 2012 Author Share Posted July 30, 2012 Well, I just cleaned this up, and added an better version of sprite. I think I like how it looks right now, and won't change anything. So here it is:![](http://oi49.tinypic.com/2dwc8dc.jpg) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cloudsky Posted July 30, 2012 Share Posted July 30, 2012 With all honesty, I prefer the old one better. Mainly because of the map shape ; this weird shape turns me off.But undeniably, this one is still good. Nice work!:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Create an account or sign in to comment
You need to be a member in order to leave a comment
Create an account
Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!
Register a new accountSign in
Already have an account? Sign in here.
Sign In Now