Zappy Posted February 10, 2013 Author Share Posted February 10, 2013 .. I also enjoy flattery, but don't get me wrong, I'm all for criticism Two characters, but at the same time only 1 character.Just wanted to show of some work and make myself feel better c: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted February 10, 2013 Share Posted February 10, 2013 I like it alot, the art is really really good! I assume you were heading for more of a cartoony look, because thats what the outcome was. The only thing I would improve would be the hair, its a little weird, maybe it'd look better just straight? I don't know, my opinion! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
azkanan Posted February 10, 2013 Share Posted February 10, 2013 I'm having difficulty finding disproportionates here. There's a few, but they're minor at best. The right knee is twisted too far "facing toward the camera" compared to the direction the upper leg is pointing. Something about the boobs irks me. The cameltoe might be a little too vivid too.That's all I can think of wrong with it, though - otherwise, brilliant piece. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zappy Posted February 10, 2013 Author Share Posted February 10, 2013 Unfortunately.. I always have this deep tormenting urge to include cameltoe's in my drawings… :c i think the problem with the boobs is that I misjudged their roundness, and though you probably can't REALLY notice it, it throws you off and makes them look weird. I think I'll fix it. For example, zoom into the bandages and you'll notice I dropped them down a bit to show dimensions. (It turned out to be too much) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zappy Posted February 11, 2013 Author Share Posted February 11, 2013 How do the boobs look now ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacquelinett Posted February 11, 2013 Share Posted February 11, 2013 not sure if it just me or the leg is wrong size? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnPony Posted February 11, 2013 Share Posted February 11, 2013 > How do the boobs look now ?> > Make an animation of her running, now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helpmeplz Posted February 11, 2013 Share Posted February 11, 2013 Her head is a little bit too small to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hisherwin Posted February 11, 2013 Share Posted February 11, 2013 boobs boobs , they are small. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zappy Posted February 11, 2013 Author Share Posted February 11, 2013 > Make an animation of her running, now.Too much jiggling, I don't think I could animate such ferocious jiggling very well ;c Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Synergy Posted February 11, 2013 Share Posted February 11, 2013 Her face is too small. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceCream Tuesday Posted February 13, 2013 Share Posted February 13, 2013 A few issues, Head is way off shape, Legs are thick as shit. Feet are huge.Breast are overly perky, make them droop a little. Lower part of her arm is to long.Work on sketching proper anatomy before you bother coloring and all.Also.. that's not camel toe.. its just lack of crotch and you putting two rounded off legs next to each other. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nook Posted February 13, 2013 Share Posted February 13, 2013 Because it's easier to just show you:Summary: her head is too small, her boobs are very lopsided, her arms are freakishly long, her right thigh is freakishly long, her left leg appears to grow out of her abdomen, and her feet are huge. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted February 17, 2013 Share Posted February 17, 2013 Nope. You don't even begin to describe it Nook. Anatomy is nonexistent here, she doesn't even hips bro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMF Posted February 17, 2013 Share Posted February 17, 2013 legs too big… boobs are great ! XD.. but still nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusy Posted February 17, 2013 Share Posted February 17, 2013 Hulk smash. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xolani Posted March 15, 2013 Share Posted March 15, 2013 That squidie creature is Amazing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zexion Posted March 15, 2013 Share Posted March 15, 2013 On the plus side, your line art and coloring are great. You just need to work on your anatomy as nook said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadalinV Posted March 15, 2013 Share Posted March 15, 2013 > Second is slenderwoman xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hadzy Posted April 18, 2013 Share Posted April 18, 2013 Legs are big , Try to make them a bit smallerHead is small , Try to make it a bit biggerAnd ….SEXY  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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