monowolf00 Posted August 13, 2008 Author Share Posted August 13, 2008 Ive been practicing on my GFX and i decided to make a shotgun; most people know how horrible my GFX is so maybe this will be better.![](http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk24/monowolf00/shotgun2.jpg)Please rate 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sterling Posted August 14, 2008 Share Posted August 14, 2008 look into making the barrel longer, and the handle more straight. Shotguns don't tend to have the handle at an angle, it should be parallel to the barrel. otherwise its looking good. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anna Comnena Posted August 14, 2008 Share Posted August 14, 2008 It looks more like a couple of space-age laser pistols than a shotgun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robin Posted August 14, 2008 Share Posted August 14, 2008 Don't shotguns lack a handle?![](http://www.frontiernet.net/~wbyman/BigShotgun.jpg)o.O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0lz Posted August 14, 2008 Share Posted August 14, 2008 It's too short in width to be a shotgun, there's also the stock at the end in which Robin was trying to mention (Big ass picture imo). You could also add some pump action to it, below the barrel sprite a pump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monowolf00 Posted August 14, 2008 Author Share Posted August 14, 2008 Hmm thanks for the suggestions. It may not be a shotgun. Idk, i just thought it looked like one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drummerpete Posted August 14, 2008 Share Posted August 14, 2008 Sawn-off-shotgun/pistol.Art wise, better than anything I can do. 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kender the great Posted August 14, 2008 Share Posted August 14, 2008 it reminds me of my old hairdryer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monowolf00 Posted August 14, 2008 Author Share Posted August 14, 2008 > [it reminds me of my old hairdryer./quote]Lmao, i wouldnt like that thing pointing at my head Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snovind Posted August 14, 2008 Share Posted August 14, 2008 It needs a proper handleboth barrels should have the same lengthIf you are going to use that as an item icon you should try to enlarge the gun so it fills 32*32 pictureNeed longer barrelsstart from scratchits not really that good, but it shows some of the things that you can improve on your piece.[![](http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/866/haglehf0.png)](http://imageshack.us) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shrig94 Posted August 14, 2008 Share Posted August 14, 2008 It really isn't a shotgun, I suggest typing a query in google image search. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monowolf00 Posted August 14, 2008 Author Share Posted August 14, 2008 ugh….I just was thinking of another gun and thought the gun I was thinking about was a shotgun. Its not a shotgun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kender the great Posted August 15, 2008 Share Posted August 15, 2008 i like it. it just looks like my old. dead. hairdryer. id keep it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robin Posted August 15, 2008 Share Posted August 15, 2008 How can you crit pixel art when there aren't any pixels? You f*cked it up in .jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0lz Posted August 17, 2008 Share Posted August 17, 2008 lol? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elder-Bunny Posted August 20, 2008 Share Posted August 20, 2008 I quite like the idea of a shotgun handgun XD . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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