LoreTech, Region 2, Codename: MT SLUMBER

[Shadowmancer]

Hey can you help me? My game is called LoreTech:
Stuff you could do for my game here; http://www.touchofdeathforums.com/smf/index.php/topic,30010.0.html
Work in progress page: http://www.touchofdeathforums.com/smf/index.php/topic,30009.0.html
Screenshots of a region:Pictures
MT Slumber:
[](http://img156.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mtslumber1qx2.png) [](http://img155.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mtslumber2xd1.png) [](http://img530.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mtslumber3uj2.png)
[](http://img155.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mtslumber4es0.png) [](http://img115.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mtslumber5sv0.png) [](http://img352.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mtslumber6qe6.png)
The entire Mtslumber Region, without inside of caves, those are awesome, but youll have to wait til i update later in the wip fourms

[Robin]

They all look boring. It's just a cliff. Why post it as a show-off?

If you're going to show some mapping off, at least do something interesting. A snowy, bare cliff isn't interesting.

[Shadowmancer]

Well tell me what i could do to make it better

[Anna Comnena]

Need more trees, the paved walk in the lower part of one of them looks odd. It's good that the cliffs aren't too straight, but they could use a little bit more crannies and outcrops.

[Shadowmancer]

Oh, oops about the paved walk, that part needs help, but it is connected to a city area below on that one, and i messed up slightly on it, part of it is missing.
I learned about the crookednees on this map:(at one point i thought it was kindof good)
[](http://img53.imageshack.us/my.php?image=screenshot0ns8.png)

[Khachaturian]

the top half is hella plain
needs more varitey, not so much as the square cliff variety

the grass looks funn.

[Shadowmancer]

I need to update the top half screen shots, but yes they are kindof plain.