Jungletoe's Electronic Music

[SawQuart]

**Newest Tracks**

**Pace**
http://soundcloud.com/jungletoe/pace

**Strut**
http://soundcloud.com/jungletoe/strut

**Hardstyle**
http://soundcloud.com/jungletoe/hardstyle

**Older, Crappy Tracks**

I got rid of them. They were taking up too much space. If you would like to download any of them, let me know so I can link you with the file.

Old titles include:
-Instants
-For the Sake of Souls
-Everglades

**Chiptunes Collection**

I made some before. Here are the links:
http://soundcloud.com/jungletoe/toga
http://soundcloud.com/jungletoe/she-is-my-lover
http://soundcloud.com/jungletoe/distant-future

[Chakkra]

What the hell is this?

A horrible version of owl city music? Oh wait after about 40, you add guitar? The fuck?
God, it's obnoxious. What were you trying to create?

[Robin]


[SawQuart]

Thanks for the "advice"  :rolleyes:

@Robin:

> 

I need real feedback, not dumbass pictures that dont ducking help me at all.

@-Vegeta-:

> What the hell is this?
>
> A horrible version of owl city music? Oh wait after about 40, you add guitar? The fuck?
> God, it's obnoxious. What were you trying to create?

Owl City is still considered Electronica… Not that I was copying their style.

[Tompwnage]

First off I was expecting more of a escalating sound. You need to bring interest into it by making the tempo rise as the music keeps going. It feels like a solo if you know what I mean, make more then 2 beats going on at the same time. Spice it up a bit.

[SawQuart]

@Tompwnageâ„¢:

> First off I was expecting more of a escalating sound. You need to bring interest into it by making the tempo rise as the music keeps going. It feels like a solo if you know what I mean, make more then 2 beats going on at the same time. Spice it up a bit.

Ok, I was mostly trying to experiment with the bells and guitar (2 instruments I have yet to use), but I see what you mean. Ill make version 2 later.

[Chakkra]

Please spare us all and don't make version 2.

[SawQuart]

@-Vegeta-:

> Please spare us all and don't make version 2.

Gtfo of my thread if your going to be an ass. Give me some ducking advice and stop being such a whore.

[Chakkra]

Maybe try listening to some REAL Electronica. And stop demeaning my favorite type of music with your pitiful attempts at making it.

[Nooblebob]

@-Vegeta-:

> Maybe try listening to some REAL Electronica. And stop demeaning my favorite type of music with your pitiful attempts at making it.

Lol.

[SawQuart]

@-Vegeta-:

> Maybe try listening to some REAL Electronica. And stop demeaning my favorite type of music with your pitiful attempts at making it.

Then make some "better" electronica than this, just to prove your ass-minded point.

[Murdoc]

@Jungletoeâ„¢:

> http://soundcloud.com/jungletoe/reflex
>
> Please critique.

Man, i really like your stuff. Good job! Check out my s%it when you get the time. >> [http://www.myspace.com/djcarrier1](http://www.myspace.com/djcarrier1)

lol, just disregard that gay pic of me, i was drunk off my ass. and im not a "real" dj lol. but tell me what you think.  XD

[SawQuart]

I made an industrial-like track since some of you don't like Crystal-ish techno…

Please critique on _this_.
[http://soundcloud.com/jungletoe/duplication](http://soundcloud.com/jungletoe/duplication)

[Murdoc]

@Jungletoeâ„¢:

> I made an industrial-like track since some of you don't like Crystal-ish techno…
>
> Please critique on _this_.
> [http://soundcloud.com/jungletoe/duplication](http://soundcloud.com/jungletoe/duplication)

sweet jive man, i like the sound  :icon_music:

[Chakkra]

Jungle, do you really think your music is good?

This isn't to be an asshole, just to help you find your way back to reality.

It's BAD. And I did tell you how to make it better, just not in a suggestive tone.

Get rid of the guitar, find a better tune, don't just use 1 instrument at a time and the same generic beat over and over.

[Tompwnage]

Here something to help you out:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g59VwDANIsQ

[Chakkra]

Tom, that's one of my favorite techno songs of all time. Amazing.

[Tompwnage]

@-Vegeta-:

> Tom, that's one of my favorite techno songs of all time. Amazing.

Personally, I am more of a Rock person. But techno with no vocals is amazing.One of my personal Fav of techno is this one:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nl4opbNt8_E

Well these examples could help you out if you take the chance to listen to them and compare it to yours. Hopefully you will find the key to making your music better. :)

[Dark Crusade]

Sounds like Spore crossed with anal sex

[Jeff]

its kind of bland, and very very repetetive… make it more complex, and layer it more.  Techno usually has quite a bit going on in it.

[Kusy]


[SawQuart]

@-Vegeta-:

> Jungle, do you really think your music is good?
>
> This isn't to be an asshole, just to help you find your way back to reality.
>
> It's BAD. And I did tell you how to make it better, just not in a suggestive tone.
>
> Get rid of the guitar, find a better tune, don't just use 1 instrument at a time and the same generic beat over and over.

Your a ducking idiot. I know that it sucks. THATS WHY I POSTED IT IN THE SHOW OFF THREAD. I am asking for advice, and you have yet to give any, only saying "this sucks, your gay" or some shit like that. All I wanted was some God damn feedback  :rolleyes:

[Thorn]

I think the big thing would be to A: Have more going on at once, and B: have it vary more.

You're off to a good start, I think, but at this point it's still not something I'd go and pirate. Bells? Have fun. Guitar? Whatever floats your boat. Try doing them both at the same time, at least.

Also, techno can get boring if the song sounds mostly the same start to finish. Vary the instruments, heck, vary the tempo. I've heard great use of the tempo increasing speed by about half over 5-10 seconds, really throws the listener before they settle in to a faster groove.

An example of the stuff I'd be aiming at, were I making techno: The works of Infected Mushroom!

>! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XQs_dv4o3Is&feature=related

They vary the tone plenty, and do lots of interesting stuff. One thing you could even do (Depending on what software you're using) is sample some voice clips in. Just stuff out of old or obscure movies works fine, huck in a line or two and you can imply volumes.
Think about it. Going along with a dark tone, builds up, then busts in the quote from Behind Enemy Lines "Evade and survive, do whatever it takes."

Doesn't SAY what's going on, but implies all sorts of things.

[Murdoc]

Nobody has given you good advice yet. If youre lookin for it, here it is: Have better build ups, use more fade-ins and fade-outs, add more layers of sounds and melodies, and most of all have fun with it. Listen to some of my stuff to see whati mean by "build ups, fade ins etc". you can even slowly add in effects to certain sounds to transform them. the beat i normally use is 4/4 bass drum , with high hi hats on the off-beats, cuz well i like house and techno, im aimin at tech house with future productions. i know youre not using high quality equipment, neither am i, so just listen to what im makin with cheap samples, and vst instruments to get a better idea of building a song with parts, and hooks, low points and high points. :)

[http://myspace.com/djcarrier1](http://myspace.com/djcarrier1)

[Braiton]

Not to be an ass but it sounds awfully boring.
Not to mention Sytrus sucks donkey balls and that's not a guitar. Oh and that kick sucks too. Get better Vsts.
Say, Techno music is suppoused to pump the Shit out of you.
Your creation sounds more like a 30 second clip being looped for 3 minutes, without generating any intresting at all in the Listener.

Keep that in mind and make good music.