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Wraith's journey to greatness! (Updated whenever I give a damn)


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I liked the first two, they made me laugh & they were (as far as I'm concerned) flawless.
the third ones head is a little… awkward.
the fourths background is terrible. (did you draw it? because it looks like you simply copyed+pasted the scorpion onto that sand.)
on the fifth the elbows don't really come in contact with the legs, they just hover above them.

Don't get me wrong, they're all great, but they could be better.
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@Nobody:

> :O nice draw yourself wresting lol

Trust me, I've thought about it. I really should too cause the muscle depth is crazy when people wrestle.

@Batman:

> I liked the first two, they made me laugh & they were (as far as I'm concerned) flawless.
> the third ones head is a little… awkward.
> the fourths background is terrible. (did you draw it? because it looks like you simply copyed+pasted the scorpion onto that sand.)
> on the fifth the elbows don't really come in contact with the legs, they just hover above them.
>
> Don't get me wrong, they're all great, but they could be better.

@third: could it be the fact he has horns…?

@fourth: yeah, the background is just some parchment actually that I changed a bit to look more like sand.

@fifth: why do the elbows need to come in contact with the legs?  :huh:

Anyway, thank you for the feedback. This is why I post my art in so many places; it helps me improve much faster because of the amount of critique I recieve.
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@Wraith:

> @third: could it be the fact he has horns…?
> @fourth: yeah, the background is just some parchment actually that I changed a bit to look more like sand.
> @fifth: why do the elbows need to come in contact with the legs?  :huh:

@third: It was more of the flatness of the head combined with how sunken in it was.
@fifth: well, they don't… I just thought you were trying to make it look like he was resting his arms on his legs.
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You see Wraith, almoast all your drawings are somewhat off - you put a lot of detail in them, I'm sure you give them some time and a lot of effort, but in the end, I never seen a drawing from you that wouldn't have something screwed up - proportions, some detail or body part that seem poinless or stupid. Come on, first one have totaly screwd up wings, I belive I told you that before lol… second one, just look at his hands and legs - are they compleatly fine? Third, well - third is a sketch but it looks fine, can't seem to find anything bad in it, the scorpion have something a bit wrong with it's pincers... and something incredibly wrong with it's shadow. And the last one? Last one looks like a fucking christmass retard (again, the shadows are screwed up - it would suggest that his hand is growing out of nowhere and ends at his wrist).

I suggest that you start drawing from nature (still art and from model), go to some art class and shit. Learning how human anatomy, shadows, and shit actualy feel like in the real life will greatly help you working on fantasy stuff - even if you are not going to draw humans.
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@Kusy:

> I suggest that you start drawing from nature (still art and from model), go to some art class and shit. Learning how human anatomy, shadows, and shit actualy feel like in the real life will greatly help you working on fantasy stuff - even if you are not going to draw humans.

Like I told Batman, this is why I post my stuff on various forums; so I know what I need to work on. I've already got a basic understanding of human anatomy, but I'm still practicing it. However, I do need to do more life drawings, so I'll start those tomorrow. Also, I'm not just going to be posting a bunch of digitals that I spent a lot of time on. I'm also going to post my studies and stuff aswell.

For now though, here's a character I just finished. I've never done any type of sci-fi drawing so sorry if it lacks a bit of creativity.

[![](http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/8253/plasmawhipchar.png)](http://img253.imageshack.us/i/plasmawhipchar.png/)
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You seem to draw things apart from eachother, not as a whole… I mean, if you look at the whole image you can instantly see that his leg is fucking humungous. The leg would do fine for it's own but it fails as a part of this picture.
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So I probably should have clarified. I meant to make this thread so I can get general artistic critique. When people critique a single piece of art I've already done then I'll probably just look at it, say "yeah, you're right" and do nothing about it. I'd prefer if people just tell me what I should work on in general on my artwork such as "add more value ranges" or "add more color." Stuff like that.

So, for now I have a self portrait that I drew to practice my use of color (yes I know it's skewed, I messed up) and a still life. The still life was drawn with a minimum size 7 brush.

[![](http://img594.imageshack.us/img594/8958/sp2a.png)](http://img594.imageshack.us/i/sp2a.png/)

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What I'm donig is giving you general advice, it's you who consider it comments on a single pice instead of taking it to heart ;D

Work on proportions and draw things as a whole, it seems like you start drawing without a general idea of what it should look like in the end (when doing desing stuff). Draw as a whole, not as four legs, tail, head, ass and then background.
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@Kusy:

> Work on proportions and draw things as a whole, it seems like you start drawing without a general idea of what it should look like in the end (when doing desing stuff). Draw as a whole, not as four legs, tail, head, ass and then background.

I do need to work on proportions. I almost always sketch out what I draw digitally before I actually add in anything else so I fix my mistakes, Idk if that's what you mean or not  :huh:

Just some boring stuff…

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Andy Samberg

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My friend wanted me to draw her. So far it looks nothing like her :/

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Was stuck at a bazaar and all I had was a pen so I tried some stuff from imagination. The arm sucks and the poses' shins are too short.

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Beautiful artwork, however your Arizona Can is another case of Mixed perspectives.
The word Arizona is straight as if I were looking at it on level ground but there is also a slight over-top view of the can.
And the blue man at the bottom of the list has a broken left leg.

All in all, keep up the good work. :)
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