airdude2 Posted March 5, 2011 Author Share Posted March 5, 2011 this is work done by Craselin, i think this is good enough to show off since i for one think he did a good job :) this is the name of my game… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robin Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 @airdude2:> i think this is good enough to show offIt's not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irhymer Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 > Warning: Constructive CriticismThe sprites in the corners are horribly cut out and pixelated, don't use them. The borders are uneven, and the center image is unaligned with the borders themselves. The fon't is cheap with nothing to emphasize it as a **Title**, try a more elegant font with a stroke, or soft gradient or something.. The dragon is cool, but looks completely out of places with RMXP graphics. The sword in adventures could work if he put more work in the title text. And lastly, MMO Adventures is a very lazy and uncreative name.Thanks for Reading,-Jake Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaaron Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 It doesn't look good. Try and get some shadowing on the text, add a border that's not 1 color, remove the tree's, and change the sprites in the corner around.Also change the text. - Constructive Criticism Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gimulex Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 In my opinion, change the font to something more epic and remove or improve the horribly cut sprites in the corners- Constructive Criticism Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
airdude2 Posted March 5, 2011 Author Share Posted March 5, 2011 it goes good with my game tho :/ give some credit for the work put into it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 What work? It looks as if none at all was put into it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gimulex Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 It's not really that good… just some sprites pasted in and stuff... Get a good pixel artist to modify it or do it yourself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irhymer Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 @Gimulex:> It's not really that good… just some sprites pasted in and stuff... Get a good pixel artist to modify it or do it yourself.He actually doesn't even need a pixel artists. Even some quick text on a background would look better, like my sig that I made in 5minutes. Its not amazing, but its not messy. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robin Posted March 6, 2011 Share Posted March 6, 2011 @airdude2:> it goes good with my game tho :/ give some credit for the work put into it?If you honestly think you deserve some appreciation for 5 minutes spent in paint then you're in the wrong line of work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sage Posted March 6, 2011 Share Posted March 6, 2011 Maybe he's new to it. Yeah, he deserves some credit. Being rude is not constructive criticism, Robin.If someone's proud of their work, sure they should show it off and see how they can improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SawQuart Posted March 13, 2011 Share Posted March 13, 2011 @Sage:> Maybe he's new to it. Yeah, he deserves some credit.He deserves credit for being new? If the world was like this then everything would be so ducked up… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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