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One Drawing a Week Challenge! [Week#5]


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Hey! In order to help me improve my art I am starting (more like restarting) my one drawing a week challenge.

This Weeks
![](http://i1270.photobucket.com/albums/jj616/eviltoastx/jayparkwip-1.png)
![](http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/105/1/5/taeyang_by_ohmynameislee-d4w90fj.png)
![](http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/106/6/2/top_big_bang_by_ohmynameislee-d4wg9u2.png)

Older Art Work

>! ![](http://i485.photobucket.com/albums/rr217/Kagonin/25-1.png)
![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/cf21342426db04f5461e8c5b0351e27d.PNG)
![](http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee434/Wingish/fin.png)
![](http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/045/4/a/girl_line_art_by_ohmynameislee-d4pru1d.png)![](http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/338/9/2/line_art___walking_person__by_ohmynameislee-d4i65ir.png)
![](http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/041/8/7/first_drawing_in_awhile_by_ohmynameislee-d4pbmic.png)
![](http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/333/7/2/line_art___custom_character_design_by_ohmynameislee-d4hpxfo.jpg)
![](http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/335/d/8/random_character_design_by_ohmynameislee-d4hwbnt.jpg)
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@ƃĀ¢Ć¢ā€žĀ¢Ć‚Ā„:

> For this weeks drawing I'll attempt to improve expressions.

Great idea, work on expressions that you can do pretty decently, just because Rose told you so, and ignore the very basics of drawing like perspective that you just can't catch or proportions that will show every time you'll draw anything below the neck.

Don't do the same thing every kid drawing wannabee manga does, nobody gives a duck that you can draw perfect anime eyes with reflexes and all that generic Asian stuff, if you can't put them on a face that doesn't look like a monkey's ass.
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@Kusy:

> Great idea, work on expressions that you can do pretty decently, just because Rose told you so, and ignore the very basics of drawing like perspective that you just can't catch or proportions that will show every time you'll draw anything below the neck.
>
> Don't do the same thing every kid drawing wannabee manga does, nobody gives a duck that you can draw perfect anime eyes with reflexes and all that generic Asian stuff, if you can't put them on a face that doesn't look like a monkey's ass.

You use a lot of sarcasm in your criticism. I can see where you're getting at, and I totally agree. The reason why I said that I will work on the expressions is because it is something that significantly stands out.
I realize that my anatomy is completely off, but its not something very easy for me to see. Yes, it is something I try to work on frequently, however my improvement in that area is very scarce.

I appreciate your advice :)
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@SuperSake:

> my name is kusy and im better than everyone else
>
> I honestly see nothing wrong with the faces, except for the one where the chick looks extremely surprised.

What's your problem bro? The faces are best part of his works and I said it, if you can't read, it's not really my problem Fuu.

All I'm saying is that he shouldn't try to improve things he already can do, trying to catch up with everything else to that level would be smarter, I don't see how you could possibly misunderstand what I wrote unless you stopped reading after the first line.

As for the drawings, it's easy to practice and do things you can do. While I'm pretty good at boosting my own ego, it's not the best idea to do so when trying to actually improve at something. As I said - you can improve your faces, but the better they'll look the dumber they'll seem when everything else is off.

And Rose, I wouldn't dare to imply otherwise.
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@Eckhart:

> It's not a chibi, it's a person with a massive head. Chibis need to be cute and chubby, not just have a huge cranium. Also, I think the arms look weird.

Thats what I was aiming for. The arms are weird, I probably messed up on the line art
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Well, that drawing has some serious issues, and you're not following too much of the advice that people in this topic gave you didn't you :)

I'll just tell you some stuff that i see wrong with the drawing.
The shading is not consistant.
Her left side is totally wrong anatomically and not eye pleasing at all. (The bulky zig zag shoulder and arm and too thin leg especially)
The general perspective but especially the armor is also totally inconsistent which makes the legs seem handicapped.
Observing some real human anatomy will help you greatly even if you are going with this anime cutsy style.

Well, good luck on your next one.
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@Hybrid.:

> Well, that drawing has some serious issues, and you're not following too much of the advice that people in this topic gave you didn't you :)
>
> I'll just tell you some stuff that i see wrong with the drawing.
> The shading is not consistant.
> Her left side is totally wrong anatomically and not eye pleasing at all. (The bulky zig zag shoulder and arm and too thin leg especially)
> The general perspective but especially the armor is also totally inconsistent which makes the legs seem handicapped.
> Observing some real human anatomy will help you greatly even if you are going with this anime cutsy style.
>
> Well, good luck on your next one.

Thanks for pointing it out! I greatly appreciate it as its very hard for me to see some of these problems without someone pointing it out.
Believe it or not I try really hard on getting the anatomy and perspective just right, but I can't see the problems myself. So its really helpful when you point them out!

Its not that I'm not following the advice, but I just have some troubles seeing them. The problems with my shading is obvious, even for me. I will keep practicing :)
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@Kusy:

> What's your problem bro? The faces are best part of his works and I said it, if you can't read, it's not really my problem Fuu.
>
> All I'm saying is that he shouldn't try to improve things he already can do, trying to catch up with everything else to that level would be smarter, I don't see how you could possibly misunderstand what I wrote unless you stopped reading after the first line.
>
> As for the drawings, it's easy to practice and do things you can do. While I'm pretty good at boosting my own ego, it's not the best idea to do so when trying to actually improve at something. As I said - you can improve your faces, but the better they'll look the dumber they'll seem when everything else is off.
>
> And Rose, I wouldn't dare to imply otherwise.

If you can't put them on a face that doesn't look like a monkey's ass?
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