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~~Currently trying to make the sprite look cell-shaded, the one on the left is what I had before.~~
Looks like this now.

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Ears are massive, especially on the one to the right. Give the ears some perspective and make the shaded region look more like the dark part of an ear instead of a semicircle. Also, the one on the right has teeny legs(and a teeny body, but I think that's intentional).
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The eyebrows might be up too high.

I'm also trying to make the shade harder, I'd like it to look Cell-Shaded.
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Eh, me and Gianni decided we both like platformers better.
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@Eckhart:

> girls' boobs are too high, they look like massive pecs.

Lol.

Well, they don't really look too bad imo, but I'll move them and see how it looks.
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@SuperSake:

> Lol.
>
> Well, they don't really look too bad imo, but I'll move them and see how it looks.
> [![](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/pics/6fd319130d745f87001864b0cb1618a2.bmp)](http://www.freemmorpgmaker.com/files/imagehost/#6fd319130d745f87001864b0cb1618a2.bmp)

Meh, I don't know if it looks better. Maybe it's just something to do with the shading or something. I guess since they'll be wearing clothes it won't be noticable.

I'm not sure how I feel about the shading on the head, I can't quite tell where the light source is.
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WELP, I've been muted. But, before I went to sleep last night, I had a FANTASTICAL idea. It involves not actually using a platformer. (Gianni and I flipped a coin, because we weren't sure).

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That's a buff baby. I don't think the detail on the body is really necessary–--feeling a bit creepy right now. But aside from that, your walk animation isn't really a walk animation. We lead with your knee when we walk. right now it looks like he is sliding on the ground. Your perspective is also a bit off on the sprite. The body looks much more fit for head on (what you see in platformers) view.

Aside from all of that, your technique is nice and shading is done pretty well (don't know what's going on with the top of his head but it'll have hair so whatever). Nice work =)
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@slym:

> That's a buff baby.

I'm not sure if this part was criticism or not, but I understand and will work on everything else you said.
Also, the base has changed a bit since I was banned.
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