Evaluete my Map !

[Shion]

Good evening everyone, I would like to share my new map and ask for an evaluation of the dear gentlemen.

Sincerely, Shion.


[dxxknight]

I would like to say that it is a really nice map good job!

[luriok]

Pretty good job dude. Only thing I notice that you might want to change is to remove one of those crossed planks on the bridge, being so close it looks repeated or redundant. :P

[mrmiguu]

Just… wow.

Can't get much better than this with RMXP graphics. Excellent, excellent work.

[jcsnider]

I would also consider removing the birds' nests. They seem weird and out of place to me.

[Jeff]

You're using slightly too many pebbles. Other than that, top notch. well done.

[Dark Crusade]

No one yet commented on the shadows? Map would look great if you removed the shadows or had them alpha blended in direct x 8 or whatever.

[Shion]

thanks for all who are considering this was my first big map, I used to make smaller, but starting to get used to and then publish to other analysis

[Likestodraw]

Very nice, but from the bridge and up (bridge and river), the repetition is just redundant and a bit weird.

[Socuine]

Very nice. I'm impressed.

[Draken]

shadows look terrible either do what kreator said or you could make the shadow part of the tree partly transparent by adding a cross pattern of the transparent color on to the shadow part.(this way you can still partly see the ground under the tree and the shadow at the same time)

a lot of mapping errors with blocks on the edge of the map (log in top left and a few others) that is always a No no in eclipse due to how the map warping works you could warp on top of a block.

Rocks in the water needs new tiles, if you use a tile in water where you can see something under the water a little then all the tiles in your water need to do that. Look at the floating Log near the top, you can see part of it under the water, but you cant see any of the rocks near it under the water at all.