KindSammy

Haha, okay. [https://soundcloud.com/ga-studios/rainbreeze-forest-grande-azure-bgm008](https://soundcloud.com/ga-studios/rainbreeze-forest-grande-azure-bgm008-1) No more birds, hope it'll be more ''listen-able''.

Hi! I would like some feedback on that WIP I'm currently on. So far, I think the bird's chirping is way too loud and probably changed the loop point. [https://soundcloud.com/ga-studios/rainbreeze-forest-grande-azure-bgm008](https://soundcloud.com/ga-studios/rainbreeze-forest-grande-azure-bgm008) Thank you! Hope you like it :3

Hi! I would like some feedback on that WIP I'm currently on. So far, I think the bird's chirping is way too loud and probably changed the loop point. [https://soundcloud.com/ga-studios/rainbreeze-forest-grande-azure-bgm008](https://soundcloud.com/ga-studios/rainbreeze-forest-grande-azure-bgm008) Thank you! Hope you like it :3

> Neat little jingles you got here! Thanks for showcasing them on the forums! Thanks man !

> Try taking your riffs and switching them up, they are great to start off with but you need to chop them up and make them different in places, bear in mind songs usually are structured generally similar to [INTRO]-[VERSE][CHORUS][VERSE][CHORUS][BRIDGE][VERSE] even just adding simple variations to your melodies would bring much more of a bigger sound and theme tune to your tunes, keep it up good work! I totally agree with you, however I'm still pretty new BGM's writing and it can get kind of confusing, especially when you're a metal guy ! But I really like your feedback and it's only helping me to work harder on what I love doing the most.

Well, thank you. As I probably said, these are all WIP and you're right about the cello. Beginner's Luck need a more ''bassy'' background, but I might as well work this one out. I'm personally proud of A New Adventure & Twilight Festival as they're my newest ones. Anyways, glad you liked it!

Hello, I recently started working with Eclipse and as a musician, I always believed that good game music really changes the gameplay experience. I made a sound cloud account where I throw some previews of the songs I'm making for my own game. I'd sure love some constructive criticism about these songs. [A New Adventure (Title Screen WIP)](https://soundcloud.com/ga-studios/a-new-adventure-grande-azure-bgm001) [Beginner's Luck (Tutorial Zone)](https://soundcloud.com/ga-studios/grande-azure-beginners-luck) [Twilight Festival (Halloween-themed song)](https://soundcloud.com/ga-studios/twilight-heaven-grande-azure-bgm004) [Ruined (Dead Knights Party Quest)](https://soundcloud.com/ga-studios/grande-azure-dead-knights-remains) Hope you all find enjoy my work and help me get better, Sammy.

> Hey KindSammy! Let us hear if you have new sound again. ;) I have a soundcloud profile. The thing is that most of the other songs are WIP and need a lot of work. [Soundcloud.](https://soundcloud.com/ga-studios)

> Sounds amazing. You could also add in some instruments to make it even more jolly. It might have it flaws and what not, but I was not able to spot any. Great work, either ways~ Well, thank you. I'll try to work on that.

> ,…," data-cid="922701" data-time="1399932684"> > > are you gonna make a maplestory kinda game ? :o I don't really know. I want my game to be party-play oriented while still being enjoyable. I can't say it will be like Maple Story, but it'll definitely have some of it's good aspects. I might start a thread since i'm starting to have a lot of content for my game and a blog, as well.

> I like it. The drummer and guitar player are tight. If I could suggest, throw in some demonic throat yelling contrasted by melodic singing that have line hooks to keep people interested. I would do both but I'm on the east coast yo. We don't usually track vocals for pre-production. I'm heading for studio this week to retrack everything and get vocals! That will sound great.

> Sounds ok, but is very messy not hardcore. Calling it hardcore was my mistake. It's messy since I don't have a lot of recording equipment yet, but thanks for the feedback!

Really nice. I'm looking forward to this.

So, I have a band and we're heading to the studios. We recorded some pre-productions before the album record and here's one of them. [ID - Ilusions](https://soundcloud.com/im-wildcat/id-illusions-pre-production) Hope you like it,

Disappointment, at its best. :(